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Addiction For Burglary: Chapter Two

Dear Diary,

Today was awesome!

I stole another thing from ASDA. Me and Leni didn't dare each other to do anything, we just couldn't afford a top that we both wanted. It was pink with a blue stripe down the middle and clung to your body. It was only ยฃ10 but our weekly spending money is ยฃ5 and we would NOT be able to share. And we wouldn't be able to save up for it because there was only two left and some middle aged ladies were already eyeing it. So Leni and I took it of the railing and went into the ladies toilets. In there, we took the tops off the hangers and into our handbags. We new that there would be no security cameras in the toilets.

When we got back to Leni's house we tried on the tops. I'm not boasting, but we looked amazing in them. I'm so glad we stole those tops. We're definitely going to be spies when we're older.

Chloe Lennox

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So did both characters steal the tops?. Why were middle aged women considering buying them?. Supermarkets tend to stock a lot of a product, there was nothing mentioned to explain why the character wouldn't wait until getting their next pocket money. What day of the week was it. Did she get pocket money on Mondays and it was still Monday or was it Saturday? These are some of the questions I had when reading this. Hope this helps you with your writing.

@blindsilence well I was actually wondering why the alarm didn't go off when the characters took the tops to the toilets as there are usually those alarm things that you have to pass. Especially in Asda with no gaps. ๐Ÿ‘

They get their pocket money on Monday's. The tops were very stylish so everyone wanted one. And the product was nearly out of stock .thnx will include this next will

Really? Oh. Well it might of been broken and the tops didn't have metal detector thingys

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