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My Hearts Longing

Sometimes I get distracted,
No, I always do-
I'm scared of what you'll think of me
When I post a new opuss.

I worry if I'm good enough
To be among the poets,
You guys are so much better at this,
I'm not afraid to show it.

I know I will get better,
But only time will tell-
If I'll ever feel a true part-
Of this amazing little world.

AJBrown

@AJBrown

16 years old new to the writing world, I'll post everything and anything :) I will follow back! #projecthumanity

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I'm really enjoying your posts, I felt exactly like you when I first started writing especially has I'd never written poetry before but this is such an encouraging and amazing community no one will judge you just write whatever you feel like and just enjoy it 😘💗

Thanks @sjw I've began to notice this, this place is amazing

I have to agree with @sjw it took me a while to find my rhythm, I will also have to check more of your posts, but them seem really good

Awww, don't worry! Everyone has to find their feet but I'm sure you'll fit in fine! 😘😉

I hope I will thanks guys

You have no reason to be concerned as you write very well! 😊

Thanks cottage but it's always the same, people never believe their own work is better

@AJBrown don't forget to tag people hun they won't get your reply if you don't ☺

@sjw thank you, I'll remember from now on

@sjw thanks 😽

@AJBrown that's true of everything we do, but that's the best way to improve. If we thought we were great already we wouldn't bother to try! 😉😽

Very true :)@crowncottage

@sjw who are u?

@AJBrown don't hide who u really r and show wat u can do ur brill just believe hun ur beautiful with ur writing xx

@bottyluvy what do you mean?

@sjw u always look at every 1 wat rank r u? I'm like ummmmmm 1037 lol

Rank 5 I look because I enjoy reading ☺

Thanks to you guys, I've jumped from 1546 to 106!

107 sorry

Wow big step. Wat was it one small step for woman one giant leap for man?

@AJBrown wow, well done!!

@AJBrown well done 👏👏😘

It's all thanks to you guys :)@bottyluvy @minxyMolly @Janflower

I'm 15 too& felt the same way when I joined😁but you'll later find yourself accepting your writing& you get better too😊✨💙

@ashhkat thanks :)

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