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Forever

I imagine a better time
When you and I were true
Not wanting to carry on
This hell we are going through

We used to laugh from dawn to dusk
Thats when laughter turned to lust
Many nights we stayed awake
Making love till our bodies ached.

Where did it all go? And where is it now?
We had it all but is this really the final bow?

I'll always stay by your side, I'll never leave
I won't forget and I'll always believe
We have it all I won't let you leave.

I can see a spark still burning
Dimmed by a world still turning
All we need is one more night
To find that love we felt so right.

Tell me you don't feel the same
Say the words I'll take the blame
Hold my hand and let me know
You will never let me go

We have a future you and I
We have it all, we gotta try

I'll always stay by your side, I'll never leave
I won't forget and I'll always believe
We have it all I won't let you leave.

I will walk by your side till deaths cold hand
Takes my body from this land
I'll be yours through eternity
We'll find our love, fulfil our destiny

Tell me you don't feel the same
Say the words I'll take the blame
Hold my hand and let me know
You will never let me go

Burrfoot

@Burrfoot

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Really goodπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish ty 😊

This is beautiful, but also a bit sad β˜ΊπŸ˜”β€

@sjw usually is that way πŸ˜‰

This almost made me cry for at least the 3rd time today πŸ˜ͺ was beautiful though

@Vicki aw ty 😊 is it wrong that I kinda like that it almost made you cry?!

No it's not wrong, it means you should be proud that your writing can have such an emotional affect on people 😊

@Vicki aw ty that really made me feel good 😊 now I better write one about belly button fluff or something to even it up a bit 😜

Beautiful πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

I'm glad it made you feel good, you are a really good writer πŸ˜ƒ haha go for it I need a giggle 😝

@naaviie @Vicki thanks again.. I can take criticism a lot easier than compliments 😊 but I like it lots 😜

A truly emotive write...lovely 😘😍😘😍😘

@misslittleDHP thanks huggy 😊 wish I could play music πŸ˜’

Beautiful written & completely captures the rollercoaster of emotions I'm sure a few of us at least, have felt πŸ˜”

@Fly10 never easy.. But def worth it 😊 ty for taking the time to read so much!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š

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