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Old?

She thinks I'm old.
Maybe she's bold?
I'd say I'm pretty old.
Yeah. I'm the old gold.

She thinks she's young.
Maybe she isn't young?
Daughter would say she's pretty old.
Yeah. She'd say, you're old gold.

She says what I like is shit.
Maybe it is shit?
I'd say my stuff is the shit.
Yeah. My stuff is the shit!

She misunderstood what makes old.
Maybe we're both the old gold?
Some would say we're too young.
Yeah. We're definitely young.

So are we old, or are we young?
Who must we trust to decide?
Who's to say if we are young?
I think it's about what's inside.

DuRoLuRo

@DuRoLuRo

Poet, musician, artist.

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Comments & Feedback (5)

Lol shut up 😖 I'm not old hehe your one funny dude lol

@aleishagayle20 Old or young? Depends on who's looking. A 5 year old would say we're old. A 50 year old would say we're young. That'll never change. There will always be two conflicting truths.

@DuRoLuRo hehe why does it have to be so complicated I don't want to get old!! Hehe I don't want to look young I should say haha 😄😄

@aleishagayle20 It's not complicated. You decide if you're old or young. No one else can ever tell you😊

@DuRoLuRo 😒 yuk whatever

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