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Uncomfortable Luxury

Well received by the bar, friends placed orders and remain not so far

I only turned and took one step, natural selection in it crept,
sipping on a glass of wine,
the strangest feeling as her eyes meet with mine
long curls of hair her fingers entwined
Someone please pull the plug on time

Fire did burn through my soul through my fingers slipping was self control
Love please don't eat me, eat me whole.

She bit her top lip, her smile has slipped
straight at me, invisible electricity whats this feeling that you do to me
Does Cupid practice his archery?
I'm in his sights to clearly see?

Her elegant form, her seductive shape... The guys beckon for their mate... for their drinks they will have to wait... for her there's no time for this to take.
A smile so playful I return remark
Eyes so warm they melt my heart

Like two magnets we begin to close in
engaging with thoughts soaked in sin
the cold stone heats up from deep within
springs with life once again
I close my eyes and count to ten, waiting for this uncomfortable luxury to cruelly end
Has Fate slipped in? A hand he lends
A gift so beautiful to me he sends
The world no longer owes its made a mends...
God she's gorgeous, we can't be friends...
A card with a drink the gentleman sends the note reads in ink that curves and bends

"this is my number which starts a tale please call two times for yes and once for fail
I do not wish to impose on you,
but when you look at me do you feel it too"

©Edward Gee Humphrey

Edhum3

@Edhum3

Just spreading some words

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Corrections entwined and Cupid to see :( apologies I will start proof reading honest ;0p

@Edhum3 you know you can edit after posting by holding finger down. 😊@Edhum3

Love this ❤

@eddie12309 no I didn't :) thank you my opuss angel

@sjw thank you for the RP guess who my inspiration was ;)

@Edhum3 your welcome

Smoooooooth 💚

Brilliant!!! Love your word play🌟👏👏👏🌟

Me of course! Lmao 😂 do tell?

@ckahn @naaviie @eddie12309 thank you so much for reporting - heart you all... Mm feeling inspired by the Opuss Angels (watch this space )

Argggg darn pre type the Bain of my life curse you *reposting lol

Opuss angels 👀

@naaviie angels guiding an inexperienced novice towards refinement, massaging his mental integrity into a firm solid writing style ;)

Ooooooo what thoughtful angels, skilled masseuses too... 😜

Whoah! You are a smooth tongued fella. Somehow, novice just doesn't seem to fit. Look forward to more great writes😘

Opuss angels- is that a bit like Charlie's Angels? Only if I can be Bosley @naaviie 😂😂😂

Wow...that would work on me my lovely😉😉

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