Self Confidence

She looks at her self in the mirror, strokes her long black hair. She adjusts her school tie in the grubby mirror, wearing a scowl on her face. 'Urrg. Why can't I have bright red hair like Lousia? I have the darkest hair, with the palest skin. I look like something out of a freaking horror movie!' she thinks to herself. She moves her hands down to her skirt, tugging at the frayed bottom. She adjusts her belt and moves away from the mirror, into a toilet cubicle. She's not fast enough to lock the door, and Louisa comes barging in the room.
"Raveeeeeeeeen! Where you at girl? I have amazing news; Tom just asked me out!" shrieks Lousia in her London accent, whilst touching up her make-up in the mirror. Raven watches her best friend through the crack in the door. She glances jelously at her long, flowing hair, and her perfectly fitting clothes on her amazing figure. It's no surprise all the boys want to be with her, and just look over Raven like a fly; worthless. A tear escapes Raven's coal eyes. She looks up at the graffiti on the back of the toilet door. So many menacing measages about her. She slumps down on the toilet and wipes her eyes. She takes a deep breath, plasters a smile on her face, and walks out to greet the world.

This girl has no self confidence, she might just make it though.