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Creatures Of The Dark

*This is a special poem, I wrote this one a few years ago on Halloween, now it's back and I refined it and changed a few parts of it, please turn the page and enjoy! :)*

I'm walking on the road in the middle of the night,
I can see something black and something really white,

It's coming closer and I can almost smell, whatever that is coming from the well,

It dissapears and then jumps out of nowhere,
It grabs me, bites my neck and I'm full of fear,

I faint and everything becomes black, I later woke up and the creature is gone and not back,

It sneaks up on me, grabs me from behind, he says
"I'll tell you a tale if you don't mind. You took a liking to me and my kind, and now to the darkest of oaths you must bind.".

And now when I've told you the story of me, I got to bite you and suck your blood, you see.

_________
Eveline xXx

Eveline

@Eveline

I love writing sad/dark poetry and short stories. If you like my stuff, please like and follow. <3

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Ain't no expert, should read my shite. But it rhymes & twighlight will love it.

You didn't like it? :\

No just saying that it would be better for fans of the subject matter. And the reason I disliked it was for that reason. But I read & commented do you did something right. Positive.

I still don't understand what you don't like it, your english is... strange. X3

Why*

I liked it. But don't like vampires. Sorry for not explaining better.

It's okay, thanks. :) Though bear in mind that I made this poem on Halloween, that's why I chose to write about vampires, I love them too though. ^_^"

And I don't like the Twilight vampires...

But still I thought a good piece of writing.

Thank you! :)

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