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Egyptian Poem !

THE EGYPTIAN HELL

The blood on my body.
Fighting for life.
Cut with a knife.

Heaven around me
Or is it hell
I was never bad
How will they tell.

The feather on the scales
My heart the next place.
They've decided my fate.

- Georgia Shaw - 11

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I like that

@Georgia2694 Loved the last line :) its as if I was transported back in time to ancient Egypt whilst I was reading!

I won a kids writing competition with this !!

@Dovahkiin @LeahLovesEC thanks for the lovely comments

YOU WON A COMPETITION!!!! Well done hunnie

Thanks !! @LeahLovesEC loads of people did. The book it will be published in is TRAVEL BACK IN RHYME it's £16 so I'm not buying it ¡¡¡¡¡!!!!!

@Georgia2694 I'll pick up a copy this week :) even though £16 is expensive for a book!

I know !! But there is at least 100 poems in it !!

@Dovahkiin I think it comes out on the 18 th may !!

@Georgia2694 sounds worth the purchase now :) I'll get it pre-ordered from Amazon :D

Cool. I'll have alook myself and see if it's on there !

I also got mine published and I will post it on opuss in about 15 minutes. I'm getting the book aswell but not from amazon

That is AWSOME I might buy it, though it is kinda expensive isn't it @Dovahkiin @Georgia2694 ??

Yeah in a way. But I bet it's worth it !! I know @rosiehill is getting one. Because hers is in it

COOL

THOUGH I PROBS WON'T GET IT!!

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