Your eyes
Set a fire
Inside,
That only
Your kiss,
Your lips,
Your hands
On my hips,
Can slake,
So take
Me while you can,
Before I start
Burning for
Another man.
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@naaviie a lot of my poetry is written quickly, I try not to over think it and just capture the emotion ๐ A minute is pushing it though, has to be a short poem! ๐
Yeh, that must be how you capture things do well, a pure, poetry thought! Now I'm thinking about peniserve (sp?) and Harry potter! ๐
@Irrational_Kimmi Wowsers! Not sure if that is an actual word, but it was my first reaction haha. Excellent job in conveying emotion ๐
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