Mince Pies... Mmmmm...

Janflower • 176 followers

Christmas's scent
Wafts through the entire house
When someone buys
A pack of mince pies

A family gathers merrily
Exchanging festivities and treats
When someone buys
A pack of mince pies

Sweet, with a tangy filling
A bundle of flavour is released
When somebody buys
A pack of mince pies

Christmas seeps into
Every sense, each soul...
When someone buys
That pack of mince pies.

#christmas #family-gathering #food #general #holiday-traditions #seasonal-celebration

How did you like this story?

Your feedback helps Janflower understand what's working

Similar Stories

The Christmas -That -Was

A very happy Christ-was To one and to all The paper all torn and littering the floor Cold turkey to eat, until it's all gone I'm sure you'll agree with me, that's a real bore.

Comments & Feedback (10)

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:15 PM

I'm with @Sjw on this one lol 👍😜

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:26 PM

@Irrational_Kimmi

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:28 PM

@HingAling24 Gasp! Not you as well... 😱😂

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:31 PM

Lovely poem but keep those pies away from me 😝😘

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:31 PM

@HingAling24 😝😝😝 someone else with sense!

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:34 PM

@sjw @HingAling24 Well, what can I say? You too obviously hate Christmas... 😉😂 And thank you 👆!

Dec 5, 2012 at 4:35 PM

I love Xmas just hate the pies! Lol 😂😘🎄🎁

Dec 5, 2012 at 5:04 PM

@sjw haha, fair enough. Thanks for the RP! 😄💗

Dec 5, 2012 at 5:04 PM

@MelchiorJ13 thank you for you RP! 😄💗

Dec 5, 2012 at 8:15 PM

@Irrational_Kimmi thanks for the RP! 😄💗

Similar Writers