Sliding doors closing,
Last-chance dive, I make it through.
Badass… Ninja-style!
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Hello there! I'm Lu / And I live in Milton Keynes… / Where I write Haikus!
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@eddie12309 @wakelee1 thank you very much! This was a spur of the moment haiku, having done just that… and feeling FAR too pleased with myself!! 😋
@eddie12309 I often don't have time for longer poems, so I started playing around with haikus when I'd have a few minutes to spare… keeps my brain occupied and exercised 😀 all feedback welcome!! Thanks for commenting!
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