"Friends?" she smiles
Biting her lip and twirling her hair,
I stand victim of trials,
Object for eyes to lock and stare,
My gift to you lies at my feet,
My heart lays shattered,
It's embrace you did not greet,
My love for you is battered,
And then it ends,
Those simple cutting words,
"let's just be friends".
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Sometimes friends are better then relationships. Though, who am I to say that? I've never been in a relationship and don't want to for AGES now. 😜 You got your eye on this girl and can't stop thinking about her? :) (Cause your last ear work sounds like you have)
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