Grey-green,
Like a murky pond,
Look to close and you will drown.
Then a bright patch,
In the middle,
An explosion of speckled brown.
Like a supernova,
Bursting out,
In the depths of space.
My eyes,
I think,
Are the most attractive thing on my face.
Mysterious,
And unreadable,
Dark, yet quite witty.
I know something,
That you don't,
And believe me it's not pretty.
Your feedback helps Platypus understand what's working
Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
A little help is all I give. No need to be so defensive. Politely say what you need to say. And I will gladly go away. A little chip, as we grow older. May be found upon our shoulder.
I furnish my throne With friendships set in stone The type that is grown The type that's unknown I type on my phone Desperate to paint a picture Stories grown from an inner scripture I...
Every face can tell it's story, Every name it tells it's tale. Every step can tell it's journey. Every success can show it's fail. Every feeling can be shown. Every word can be expressed.
Disparity 'tween me and truth I could just blame it on my youth Or that I am misunderstood Except I won't, I think I should.
Every cloud has a silver lining.... Mine must be hiding Hope and keep your fingers crossed.... My hope must have got lost Good luck and break a leg....
My brain is rolling around in my skull. It just doesn't seem to work right today. Everything feels pretty boring and dull. It wasn't much different yesterday.
Some people have their blue days... Well, mine are grey and yellow. Some people have their red days... Well I'll stay white with mellow. Some people have their green days...
My solitude is my mind. My true love is inside to find. A kiss upon my tender lips. There is nothing more I want from this. My lips go to part. I say those words. And write them down.
@ZephyrForza just asking, is ur surname Seager by any chance? Cos I know someone called Jasmine Seager who likes to draw and write
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