Alone forever
Burnt out
Reborn anew
Glowing coals
Dying fire
Embers warm
Ash covered
Ruby plumage
Fierce beak
Vast wings
Amber feathered
Sharp talons
Soft heart
Loyal heart
Brave heart.
Phoenix Heart.
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@ckahn I can't remember what this style of poem is, but we did it in class a while ago. The idea is to describe the thing/person in as many two word lines you want. It's good fun. 😄
Ahhh, yes. I did this in college. One of our two words had to be a verb. I do think you've inspired me to resurrect it for Oppuss!😘
@ckahn maybe you should start a competition about it! That would be fun. Pick a thing, and get people to describe it in that style.
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