Submerged in a sea of words,
My cries do not seem to be heard.
My legs suddenly will not swim,
This water now seems very dim.
There are shadows stalking the seabed,
And sting rays that want me for dead.
No dolphins to save me now,
To get out of this mess I wonder how...
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
I scream for help. My plea is drowned under tidal roars. I gasp for air, but choke on ice. The ocean pulls me to its depths, calling for me. I resist. I struggle for life.
I scream for help. My plea is drowned under tidal roars. I gasp for air, but choke on ice. The ocean pulls me to its depths, calling for me. I resist. I struggle for life.
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