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The Experiment: 3

Chapter three: The weapons room.

I did it. I opened the strange metal door. I don't think those are dreams I've been having, I think they're real, it's a part of me can just detach itself from my body, and walk around without being seen or heard. Pretty exciting.

Anyway, I was shocked and surprised when the door swung open. First of all it was freezing. Icy mist swirled about the place, freezing whatever it touched. The room was average size. Not too big, not to small. With shiny metal shelves lining each wall. On the shelves stood an assortment of knives, huge guns, strange floating orbs, and jars filled with a sort of green fire. There were tags attached to each object, but the writing was in a strange language I couldn't read. There was this one sword that really caught my eye, it's like I was drawn to it. It was solid gold, except for this one red crystal set into the hilt, which was glowing slightly. I was mesmerised. How did it get here? Who owned it?..
Then disaster struck. It was swinging it around about, when I noticed I wasn't very transparent anymore. I was becoming solid, like I actually teleported into the room. I dropped the sword and ran to the door, but that just set of the tiny invisible alarm system, making matters worse. Alarms were blaring in my ears, before I knew it, everything went black.

(Any feedback or tips? Just leave them in the comments, thanks. :) )

RedWednesday

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Keep going as you are, I'm really hooked i love graphic novels and your words really help me picture the whole thing, great ! (-:

@Stablish Thank you! :)

So good please keep going

I thought gold was a soft metal or something. Does it mean that the sword is going to be useless?

@RedWednesday that was awsome keep writing can't wait to hear more

Very promising story! Have you got it all planned out?

@speed577 @overskill I have a sort of rough draft but I'm kind of still making it up.

@speed577 thanks :P

@leonidka9 No its a special kind

@ben_leggatt is looking like a promising writer, if you get time could you give him some feedback, I'm not to good at it, really appreciate it. (-:

@Stablish Sure :)

@RedWednesday Thank you, can't wait for more of Your story.(-:

This story is brilliant! Usually i dont like sci fi novels, but this has me hooked! Cant wait for ch. 3!!! ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜‰

@nollaigdream thanks! :D

Oops i mean ch. 4

@RedWednesday, please can you bring out no.4 soon! Please? (โ€ข_โ€ข)

@Stablish thanks man! :)@RedWednesday Thanks also :) ur story is amazing btw :) :D

@RedWednesday did you link this to the Percy Jackson series didn't you

Also can't wait for chapter 4

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