Unfortunates Progress

Hi :3

I started writing "Unfortunates" today! I don't really have a set date for when it will be finished, but it's going to take a while cuz it's pretty long. It's going good so far, but I really need a thesaurus. :P

It would be great if when I finished people could critique me on spelling, idea, etc. I want to improve it as muchas possible because I'd like to publish it when I'm older.
People will probably think I'm some kind of depressed, emo kid when they read it because of the stuff that happens, but hey, it's not called "Unfortunates" for nothing! xD Adios!