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Ending The Long Watch

Misty tendrils slowly curl,
A dreaming dragon's flicking tongue,
Out of hollows, pearly shrouded,
Against the walls over hill tops flung.

So much time and patient labor
Have piled upward, stone by stone,
This mighty bulwark, battle tested,
Strong enough to defend alone.

Wind twisted trunks with black-green leaves
Writhe across steep and rugged slopes.
Crushing skies hang heavy and low,
Black and gray, the colors of hope.

The gloomy mood of this guard tower,
Lit by one lone guttering candle,
Waits to be broken by your touch
Upon that weathered oak door's handle.

VikingHorn

@VikingHorn

Hi! I make beer, cook food, play bass, and occasionally write words

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@eddie12309 @naaviie I know this is late for your household challenges, just an extra for your enjoyment, as I just now have an opportunity to post again. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Beautiful imagery and just lovely pace to this too ๐Ÿ’šโค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ

Agree with naaviie the imagery is really rich โค๐Ÿ’—โค

Oh, you're just showing off now. Incredible writing

@wolfie I had a long flight back from China with some time to kill! Thank you very kindly.

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Beautiful piece.

This is a truly superb write my sweet๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’š

Hmmm. Have I found the key?

@milkeyedmender @misslittleDHP @ckahn Thank you for the reposts! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ”‘

Top notch!

@Munford Thank you sir! It's always especially gratifying when someone finds something a little bit old. Sometimes these things have such a short half-life.

@VikingHorn yes true!

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