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Dream Broken

There was a sadness in his eyes, though it's depth could not be seen.
Freedom only found in sleep, to sleep, a chance to dream.

To sail on open waters, to fly amongst the stars.
A body formed from energy, not a body wrapped in scars.

Here he leapt unbounded.
There he lay in pain.
Every time he woke to feel, he hoped for sleep again.

Colourful was his subconscious, cold and white was the here and now.
If only he could stay asleep, and never wake somehow.

If only he could be the man now locked inside his head.
Instead of the broken vessel, wired up to a hospital bed.

Weirdwolf

@Weirdwolf

Random Ramblings of Brandon Wolf

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Oh my how I've missed your writes and you....how are you feeling my lovely??

@misslittleDHP All the better for that lovely warm welcome 😃

@Weirdwolf I was only thinking about you the other day and lee wrote a riddle about someone coming and it got me thinking of you again....I've missed yooooooou💙💙

☺Awww 💙💙

Hey 😊 so glad your back missed you and your writing, hope your ok? 😘💋❤

@misslittleDHP I was right with the riddle. Welcome back ☺

@eddie12309 yaaaay!!...yes you were lovely lady...you are great at riddles🎉🎈👏❤💚💓

@Weirdwolf great to see you and a fab poem to return with! Hope we are going to see more of you again??? ☺

@sjw I'm O, not to sure about K...... 😉

@eddie12309 thank you

@Irrational_Kimmi I'm saying nothing, last time I said I was back I wasn't so I'm keeping 😷

@Weirdwolf ok 😷 we'll play it by ear 👍

@Irrational_Kimmi that's not an ear! This in an 👂

@Weirdwolf haha, well I look stoopid 😜

@Weirdwolf and there's the home run... Evening fella glad to see your work gracing this app again. And thanks for keeping it short, I'm out of razors... 😂😂😂👏👏👏😉

Awesome👍👏🎈😊

@leelee101 ah the blissful loveliness of good company. Good evening to you good Sir.

@Lovinmalamutes Thanks 😃

Maybe a bit of time on opuss will put the K back with your O 😜😘

@Weirdwolf ☕ tea?

@sjw let's hope do 😉

@leelee101 best idea I've heard all day! ☕

@Weirdwolf yup I'm off to get one now. How u feeling mate? Do you think you'll stay a while? 😉☕

@leelee101 I think I'll make an effort to drink more tea with my wordsmith friends and block out the misery of reality for at least as long as the tea is flowing 😉

@Weirdwolf ☕☕☕

What a tender piece to welcome you back to, nice to see your name on my feed again! Been to long - I hope you had a good break? Written much on your travels from Opussia? I know lee's sneaky riddle was about you 😜💚

@naaviie my pen has been silent for too long, too many needless distractions, but my pen is not empty 😉

Hurray!

Good to see you're back again mate and a cracking piece of writing 🍁🚬🍻

Your poems have a sadness with a certain beauty about them. I absolutely adore it. 💚

@blingey123 Thank you again 😃

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