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Passionate Violence

He watched them from the shadows, his eyes locked tight to his prize.
Soon the pair would go their separate ways, one of which soon to meet their demise.

He had waited, he was patient, he would savour well this night.
He would share with this man all his pain, where this man shared her every delight.

He tasted bile now in his mouth, as the pair leant in to embrace.
"I'll have you soon you bastard", he thought:
"I shall carve the flesh from your face!".

His anger boiled inside him.
Not yet, his mind said, not yet.
The rain was falling heavy now, as he watched them both get wet.

Seething now he watched them, watched their parting kiss.
Watched her as she took her path, then followed him down his.

He walked a few paces behind him, heard him speak to his wife on the phone:
"Sorry babe, had to work late.... Ok ..... I'm on my way home".

He'd unsheathed the big knife already, as the man arrived at his car.
Followed real close in his shadow, as the car door was opened ajar.

"Excuse me mate, do you have a light?"

"No sorry pal, I don't smoke"
- turning to see who was standing so close.
The big knife flashed at a throat.

In a disbelieving heartbeat, the man took a step back and fell.
Unable to speak or shout for help, just a muted, gurgling yell.

"Let me introduce myself before your life expires.
You see I think you know my wife, or at least know her desires...."

"So, now you stole my life from me, I shall steal the life from you.
Know I shall live to blacken your name in everything I do."

"Know that now, before you die, I have traced the route of your seed.
Know that I will be standing by to watch your family bleed."

"Never stir another mans rhubarb! Never covert another mans wife!
You see how your..... Misdemeanour,
Will cost far more than your life."

"Well, I must say, past all that blood it's hard to make out your tears.
Though I see in the fading life in your eyes that I have touched upon your fears."

"Good, that's what I wanted!
Now what else?.....
Oh yes! Your face.
Consider it a gift of sorts, from you to me in this place."

"Something I can take back home, something for my beautiful wife.
Something I can give to her, before I give her this knife."

He slipped back into the shadows as the rain washed the blood from his hands.
A killer born from the passion,
Of his wife and another man.

Weirdwolf

@Weirdwolf

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Comments & Feedback (29)

Late night epicness! Well done mate. Now, where's my razor... 😂👍☕😉

Wow Brandon dark but expertly crafted my friend, it is good to be reading your work again. Another classic opuss👏👏👏👏👏

@leelee101 I fed all your razors

@leelee101 to your 🐰🐰🐰🐰's!!!

Ohhh! Gotta pay to play😲 good write!😘

@merlin1038 Thank you very much 😃

@ckahn 😃 Cheer's 🍺🍺

👏👏👏💀 hate it when someone stirs my rhubarb !

@Weirdwolf 😱😱😱 no more tea for you... 😂😂

Never stir another mans rhubarb!! 😱😱😱

@Burrfoot You can smoke my fags, drink my beer, wear my underpants.... But get your god damn paws off my Rhubarb!!! 😉

@naaviie 😃

😂😂😂

Crikey!!! Now there's a million and one good reasons to stay loyal!!! 👿👿👿😱😱😱😱😂😂

@MrsS There's a Psycho waiting in everyone for that push that's just one push too far 👿

Lol I want a rhubarb emoticon!

@MrsS Thank's for the RP 😃

@Burrfoot 🌵👈👀 we'll just call this Rhubarb if ya like? It's not like we need a Cactus anyway 😃

Gruesome 😱👿 am I twisted? I actually feel sorry for the killer lol 😱😂

@sjw Yup, me too, although I do believe he's remarried now and living in Hampshire. 😳

Well done, enjoyed it, tell me have you changed your picture?

Goodness me, you are not one to upset then! 😱😉😽

@shazydee I have indeed :)

@crowncottage 👿😜

Wow...a very powerful, gripping and chilling write....just up my street...fabbo👏👏👏😱😨😱😨😘😘

@misslittleDHP Thanks honey 😉

Blimey this is epic and Lmfao at the rhubarb pulling 😂😂😂👍

@smellyfingers 😃 Glad you liked it my friend 😃

@smellyfingers Thank's for the RP Sir 👍

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