18 June 2012
The lone red deer stag grazed amongst the Heather, it's huge antlers swayed as though they were the branches of a tree. He paused and sniffed the air... Something wasn't right, " Who is it! " the stag snorted, " why must you spy on another deer!? ". At first, nothing. But the snapping of twigs notified that someone was going to come out of the thicket. A young stag with only three points on his antlers , meaning he was three years old, emerged from the thicket and scowled " me!? Spy!? " " Then what where you doing Bretach?! " The older stag demanded. " I was coming to bring you a message Trealoch... from the lead hind, your hind Selach is fawning ". At one Trealoch stopped chewing the grass " Selach! ... Thank you Bretach "
" please lord " Angorr snarled, " the young of Trealoch is to be born tonight... Now is our chance to strike on the protectors, we don't need them anymore afterall... We have our army of the Angorrla "
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King Of The Deer • Opuss № I