29 April 2012

Torvaakin, the place that That the mythical and mysterious used to live in harmony until the end time 2012 ( the year 2012 to us humans ) brought a new ruler ,king Dolriif the shape-shifter ,who brought endless starvation and wars to his subjects . However,Torvaakin has a chance to end the evil tyrant once and for all because king Dolriif's mage had a message from the spirits that four young heroes would arise and destroy Dolriif to bring peace back to Torvaakin.

" Dolriif's men ard here!, hide the children in the forest " A large, black Centaur bellowed as he stared at the endless ligns of shape-shifters approaching the camp." Yes Captain Brechin " a slightly smaller,White centaur whinnied before trotting away, " Dad... Please don't fight them... I don't want to loose you aswell as mum ". Brechin swung round " Muur ! Get to the forest now! " he snarled. " But" " No buts! Go now! " Tears welled in Muur's eyes and he galloped away towards his look-out rock, anger and sadness boiled inside him as he galloped. Before he even got to his look-out rock he heard a loud,shrill whinny that echoed through his mind, battle had commenced. Muur raced to the look-out rock and peered down into the scene of the battle , Muur didn't want to look down but he had to be sure that his father was alive so he scanned the long line of centaurs till he saw a giant black centaur. Muur was proud of his father but was also angry at his fathers arrogance, he never thought about how Muur's life would change if he died, all he wanted was war and endless bloodshed. Just as Muur was about to run to the other young centaurs a shadow caught his eye, " Who... Who's there?... I warn you... I'm captain Brechin's son..." Muur stammered. " Oh I'm so scared ! " It mocked, " brave little centaur you are, standing up to a wolf-person " (I dont mean a werewolf, there's a difference) gulped, he was doomed. The wolf-person walked into the moonlight. " Hold on..." Muur struggled to hold in a snigger, " you're only a pup! " at this point Muur couldn't hold it in and laughed so hard that his sides hurt," oh yes laugh it up already " the bemused young wolf-person growled, " I bet I can beat you any day! " Muur was about to speak when he heard the retreat horn sounding," quick, run!" he yelled at the wolf-person. " Why ? " it yipped. " That was the retreat horn so Dolriifs army must be beating us so we have to RUN! " *********************************** Tired , will write more tomorrow ( if you have any suggestions or things I could improve on, feel free to ask )

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