3 May 2012
" Eriin, you there ? " Muur whispered and waited for a reply. " about time you showed up! " Errin growled playfully. Muur snorted and whinnied " well I found a small sheltered cave if that's ok?"
" Anything is better than this rock " Eriin laughed and followed Muur to the cave.
" seems alrite " Eriin sniffed the air and curled up inside, " so... Come and see me tomorrow cause I am shattered ". Muur nodded and trotted back towards camp but before he got there a booming voice stopped him in his tracks, " what are you doing with a wolf-person?! " it growled
" N...nothing father " Muur squeaked helplessly
" don't lie to me Muur! "
" I... I was just helping her...her pack was wiped out by Dolriif's men so I found her a place to stay" . Brechin looked Muur straight in the eyes and did the strangest thing Muur had ever seen him do... He cried. " oh Muur, we aren't going to win this war... I want it to be over so that I can protect you rather than being out there and risking you becoming an orphan..." Muur just stayed silent but walked his tearfull father to camp. Muur hated war, if it made captains cry and death to innocent then it had to be bad.
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