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Decided to re-post my first Opuss (posted about 5 months ago) and collect opinions :) It'a short, apocalyptic piece...

Remember those prophecies? The ones which we laughed at? Joked about; 'Bring it on 2012!' ? They weren't all rubbish, except no-one's left to reflect on that, realise the terrible mistake they made by ignoring the Mayan calendars and dark truths hidden within the apocalyptic prophecies... Well, that's just their loss. See, if they'd picked up on the signs... Like, did nobody realise that the climate balance was out of control?! The hottest February in years, the next week, blizarding snow? The 'natural' disasters? The earthquakes, the tornados, wild fires, floods and droughts? They weren't there out of chance, they were all coincidental, planned, calculated and pre-recorded. Not that it matters now, everyone's gone, dead, blown to ash by the immense explosion from the centre of the Earth, subsequently creating a domino effect, destroying Earth, the solar system, the Sun, the galaxy, the Universe.
No-one's left now, though. No-one at all to remember and reflect on 21.12.2012. The day the human race and any other species in which evolution worked so hard to create down to the finest detail was wiped out, in the Apocalypse.

al3xia

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I'm a teenage girl who loves to write short pieces whether its a short story or fan-fiction, i just love to write freely and mould my own characters and settings. I also enjoy creating smaller pieces like poems and lyrics. I play the guitar and piano and could listen to my iPod all day! I read all the time and watch so many movies I lose count of them all and like browsing the internet whether its socializing or reading fan-fictions or looking at new pieces posted on art-sharing websites, another hobby of mine. I hope you like what I post on here, and i welcome constructive critiscism too, always looking for ways to improve my writing... :) x

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I so hope that the Mayans are wrong... Also, I remember reading an Opuss that said the Mayans never accounted for Leap Years; so really the world should have ended 7 months ago... (That's what the Opuss had said)

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I agree but I think they are to be honest, it's just a weirdly exciting subject to write about... Thanks for comment :)

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