What is this torture?
Sleepless I awake, wishing the pain to stop,
I am taken.
Shaken and breathless,
Selfish and faceless,
Fantasy haunting my reason,
Can I forget now? Please?
I am unfamiliar with her,
Willingly I submit, crushed under,
The ferocity of reality,
It cannot be? Wish it not? Wanting more is all I have.
Lol random I know moment of madness when I woke up lol still lying in bed :-)
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They call me Mistress and Priestess but I'm just me young crazy and free!
I'm the bright light In the fight Whilst dreaming In my dream Tonights frightening But still I'm fighting to scream Enlightening your supreme brightening figurine Don't be careless Care less...
Shake the sweet subconscious. Covers let me be. Pillows plumped and pretty. Please hold my dreams for me. I'll leave them where I left them. Scattered on fields of white. Please do not disturb.
@aleishagayle20 That's always the best time to write I think. I wish I could go back to bed, had a pretty fun dream for once.😉
@aleishagayle20 nice stuff.😉 a bit strange. But that's what I love ya for.😘 oops there I go throwing love about again.😜
@aleishagayle20 I need to channel some of that half asleep stuff! My recent efforts have been fairly lacklustre!
@Stablish thank you I try to please hehe 😉 lol wait can I say I'm a freak but love it!! 😝 hehe hey no love but thanks my other one is better hope you like it bbe 😌
@Nom I like your work think your pretty good 😄 just take inspiration from whatever take notes in the day it will come to you keep a notebook next to your bed that's what I do lmao 😝
@aleishagayle20 I don't think it was random at all :) it flows beautifully, especially 'Shaken and breathless, Selfish and faceless' very powerful lines.
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