Hello
So, I'm starting to write a story. I won't be on Opuss much, but I'll still like and comment and repost other writers' work!
Georgia
Hello
So, I'm starting to write a story. I won't be on Opuss much, but I'll still like and comment and repost other writers' work!
Georgia
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Just a 12-year-old girl. I'm completely normal, but different. I do NOT follow the crowd. I want to be me. I want to be happy, of course I do, but what I'm starting to wonder is "to make more friends, do I need to be a clone? Do a need a boyfriend? Do I need contacts? Do I need to wear makeup?" Or am I fine the way I am, and the other people are too thick to notice that?
Swift is the flow of time,. Shift your paragraph,. Move the word within the letter,. The letter within the line,. Expansive thought reaches throughout time,. Forever ending,. Never starting,.
She paints a pretty picture But this story has a twist For the paint brush is her knife The canvas is her wrist.
Please don't go, It's not good. Even though, They say you should. Just Go Run, You Won't Fall. It's Not Fun, With Those "All"s. Told You So, Yet You Cry. Your Life Goes To The Sky..
In getting there. 20 people read my opusses, one of which being the fab @Nikujagagirl. Thanks to everyone who follows me, you know who you are xoxoxoxo from Onixea Coilette.
Smile through the sorrow Dance through the pain Laugh through the crying And sing in the rain. Give way to the sorrow Succumb to the pain Join in with the crying And weep with the rain..
Always expected to do something more. To do something better for. Everyone but me. But I know that one boy that can see. Not the perfectionist but the rebel inside. The fighter the one to win.
You try to be perfect, But when you're perfect Your fake When you're yourself I love you..
I'll acknowledge you now what do you mean before I just noticed you and after this I'll acknowledge you.
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