9 June 2012
You all will of heard of the fairy tale. But not this, not this version, not my version. Imagine a modern day cottage. 2 bedrooms, new kitchen, attic room, living room, small alotment. Now the story begins.
Once apon a time lived a girl called Cinderella, but everybody call's her Ella.She has two stepsister, beautiful they were. Alway's in the most up to date clothes, from new look or lipsy. Ella's stepmum got Rosey and Poppy everything. She never got Ella anything, not for her birthday not for christmas. She didn't let her have a phone! How was she ment to get on facebook! Rosey and Poppy shared a fabulous room and there stepmum had her own room now Ella's dad died. Poor Ella had to sleep in the old attic with just a blanket and a airbed. Ella had to do all the jobs, such as hoovering with the old dison, cleaning the fridge and the electric fire. She just wanted to go out and chill with her friends. But she wasn't aloud to go outside. Ella had been trapped in the house since she was 10 she was only aloud to go out to help the tesco delivery van unload.
One night her sister's came in from the night club all in there sparkley NEW dresses Rosey's stripped like a zebra. Poppies as black as her long curled hair. They went straight past Ella throwing their hight heels at her on the to tell there mum there great news. "oh my god mum we have some great news, tell her rosey, ... wait ... let me ... no you no ... me err you quick" Poppy blurted out. Rosey began to speak when she noticed me in the corridor," go away cleaner you can't listen to this!" she slammed the door behind her. Ella put carried on dusting the jewelleey draw but she could here every word they said. A disco at Jack Jones's house on saturday fancy dress. As soon as the new's was spoken so were they, off to the shops to get the best costume that were to offer. Ella wanted to go and knew she had to sneak out. But first she needed a costume ... with a mask. She wasn't aloud out, so she would have to bring it to her. Nobody knew but Ella had bought herself a small cheap laptop with 'her' ( sisters ) money. She went to the draw got out her stepmum's spair debit card and went to her laptop. She looked on ever single site untill she found the perfect outfit, a angel costume, white shorts, angel winged vest with a perfect mask to cover her eyes and a halo of course. She knew it would. Come at the same time as the tesco delivery so she had no worries. But she needed shoes!
She had just orded her costume and put the card back when Rosey, Poppy and her stepmum arrived home. There was no time to think about shoes she had to clean other wise she would be dead. That night through a small gap in the floor boards Ella saw her stepsisters costumes. A devil and a 'bunny'. Poppy's hwas the bunny and her had some perfectly whote heels with them. If Ella could get them without Poppy realising she sould have her outfit.
The next day was saturday. The deliveries were at 14:00 and the party started at 20:00 and her stepmum came back from the beautition's at midnight. So Ella had time to get the shoes. It was easy as well while they went to the hair dressers she went in and took the shoes out of the bag and replaced it with some of her other white shoes. Then she hide them with her costume which arrived an hour before.
At 19:45 Ella's stepmum took Rosey and Poppy to the party and Poppy didn't even notice about the shoes. At 19:50 Ella jumped out of an unlocked window, all dressed with her make up on and ready to party. She had took one of her stepmum's white watches and set the alarm on it so she knew she wouldn't be late. Ella knew that Jack's house wasn't far in walking distance actually. She got there in about 5minutes but the party had already started. The first hour Ella spent mingling and avoiding her sister's. But in the second hour she saw somebody and he saw her. They didn't know each other but in just under an hour they knew each other except each others name's. They dance untill a vibration intrupted them. Ella said she had to go, then suddenly her date revilled who he was. The hot vampire turned out to be Jack. Jack. She'd been dancing with Jack. She couldn't say who she was but she shouted she house number out. But there were 10 street's with the house number 56 so i was going to be a task.
She got home and her stepmum was just walking in so she quickly put an apron over the top of her outfit and took her halo and mask off. However, there was no time for the shoes. She picked up the duster and quickely started dusting. Ella's stepmum walked past and suddenly she saw the shoes. She yelled at Ella and she couldn't understand why she was wearing them. And the worse thing was that she had lost one at the party, the strap came loose and it fell off just before she left the house. Ella got punished to 4 weeks hoovering, which she did anyway so i wasn't any different.
The next day she heard her sister saying that Jack was going round all houses with the number 56 on their door to find his perfect match. He would know it was her because the shoe would fit and his match would have the perfect eyes. Nobodies foot had been a perfect match yet and Jack was giving up hope. Ella's street was next but she had been locked in the attic because Rosey and Poppy had their suspitions. Because they knew Ella had stolen and lost her shoe. Poppy knew it would fit her and she had beautiful eye's. Rosey's foot was smaller than Poppies but if she could just get Jack to see her eye's she would have a good chance.
About 5 minutes later Jack arrived. Poppy went first and her foot fitted. Jack grinned," let me look into gour eye's so i know your the one, please". He stared deeply into Poppies eye's but he knew she wasn't the one. He looked at Rosey's eye's first after she begged. " your eye's are so beautiful so simular, if the shoe fits you are the one". The shoe slipped right off her foot and Jack was diserpointed. He went up to their mum and asked if there was anybody that was not there. He was confused because this was the last house left. Suddenly there was a load sound and Ella came tumbling down. Jack was astonished, especially since she was holding the other shoe. The shoe obviously fit and her eye's had the same glisen to them. Ella was definatley the one...
Cinderella • Opuss № I