I have been writing scripts for both film and television since I was 12 years old. I have decided it time to try my hand at writing a book. I am looking for positive feedback, if you think you have an idea on how I can improve please let me know. Thank you.
I sit on the opposite bank of the HOTTIES from the police, I am hiding in the overgrown shrubbery with my cine 8 camera. Maybe I will send this footage to the police.
PART ONE: I love my car. I said to myself as I make my way to work. I'm driving a Nissan Juke, this truly is a chunky beast. A monster of a car that makes you think your the king of the road.