2 December 2012
MinxMolly talks of coursework stress And RichWithey's going insane Compared to both of those two I am boring weak and plain
My poems are all unstructured They talk of stupid things Is this the path I'm walking? Is this the son I sing?
Snow is being talked about By MrsS and BethyBoo If I am to compare to these, what am I to do?
The poem that I'm writing Is just like all the rest I just want to be good enough, I don't need to be the best!
I need some handy tips Some help from real artists Who paint colours into my head with words. I want to be able to do this!
It's getting silly that You're still reading these hurried words They twist and writhe but never dance, and just flap around like birds
I can't get any of my poems To conform to my own standards The words that come into my head are annoying little bastards
They stay there and I write them down Not thinking that they aren't that good But when it comes to vocabulary I swear I'm like a plank of wood!
I just can't seem to find the words To ask you what I need But until I'm good enough for me, then this is my vice; my greed.
Please help me now and comment Because we both know I'm lacking a lot Just tell me! I need to know to improve! * Points to the comment box*
How To Improve? • Opuss № I