It's just science
It's just nature
It's just logic
Point A leads to point B
Cause and effect
Action and result
Like 3 - 2 = 1
You do it, and it follows
So I did it
It didn't follow
Then I fell down
So depressed
Stopped believing
Then tried again
Something new
Started to believe
I could see the light in my eyes
I knew it would happen
This time
Everything would be right
I did it
And it didn't follow
Crashed and burned
Defied nature
I looked in the mirror
Now I'm dead again
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The world is indeed full of peril and in it there are many dark places. But still there is much that is fair. ~Tolkien
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Comments & Feedback (2)
That is ringing my strings! My depression experience of the past. I have given up hope of ever being free of it. This work is resonating to me. I understand.
@guitaRN Thank you, that means a lot. This is rooted in my main problem, which is body image and making changes :/ I'm about to go on diet pills because nothing is working.
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