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Your crying eyes, the tears that fall.
Looks like you wont make it.
Before you fall, I’ll give you my all.
I’ll try to make them stop it, so don’t sweat it.
I always be here to lean on,
Don’t let them get the better of you.
Stand from the crowd, don’t let them hurt you.
‘Cos I’ll help you out.

Ignore them when they hurt you,
Verbal or through your phone.
Bleeding from the inside,
Staring into their eyes.
They don’t know what their doing,
Nobody knows why.
Why you are the target,
You’re a waste of their time.
You gotta get out, and tell someone------ x2

Punches and pain now,
Rushing through your system.
Their deadly like a bullet,
It’s time to become the gun.
Raise your head so high,
Take them from the glory.
It you has was won the fight,
Show them what is right.
You gotta get out, and tell someone------ x2

I wrote this song to the beat of witch craft by pendulum and I want to know if it's ok. Our topic was bulling and usually I'm better at song writing it's just the fact that I am under pressure and I am very bad under pressure -.- please be honest with me :) thank you <3