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The End

He threw me on the floor
The tears trickled down my pale face
He walked towards me
My heart speeded up so fast
I could barely catch my breath
He walked away from me and disappeared
I knew this was the end
My life must draw to a close
My legs gave way and I fell to the ground
My head hit the cold surface hard and a warm fluid spread across my face
I couldn't feel my arms
Yet nor could I see them
My red lips turned pale
My body became paralysed
I lay there
Still
In the darkness
My heart slowed down to slower than a walking pace
So slow I couldn't breathe
I let my life slip away gently
I didn't even try to catch it
It went without a bye
And that is how it stayed

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