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The Forest Of Magic Part 2

Oh my gosh guys, I'm sooo sorry, I wrote the whole part then it wouldn't post. I tried to comment on my last one, but it wouldn't work. I'm sorry but I'll post the next one as quick as possible. It's sooo annoying because I can't write any of the next part, Ughh.

'Right you can go in now!!' Amber giggled at Hobnob. He was hang upside down trying to eat berrys.
He jumped down and collected his berry basket and ran inside. It was getting very dark and Charmai was STILL in labour.
Amber heard some rustling in the trees, so as us humans do, she went to take a look.
'Gotcha now!!'

β€’10 Seconds Laterβ€’
Silence. There was nothing to be heard. Or see. Or smell.
Back at the cabin, Charmai had just given birth to the first twin. They were still identifying the baby monkey but Dave reckons its the boy.
'Go on,' Dave was supporting Charmai. 'One last push, Darling. You can do it!!'
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'Waaaa!!' Wailed the baby girl softly. The paramedics of the forest, had arrived and were examining the baby monkeys.
'Mamma!!' Shouted Hobnob, then he realised her sweating. 'Mamma, Ok??' Hobnob was concerned.
'I.. I'm fine,' Charmai struggled to catch her breath.
'Uh ok, Me go to bed.'
Charmai recovered quickly and her and Dave walked into the kitchen, hand in hand, to see their children.
The note that Amber left Charmai and Dave, was covered in berry stains. So it looked like Hobnob had been drawing. And of course Hobnob hadn't told his mum or stepdad that Amber was here. So for all they know she must still be at home....

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Hey, If you think 11 year olds can't write...... Take a look at my Opusses!!!!

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That happened to me once and I had to delete opuss and get it again. The really good I can't wait for the next chapter I want to know what the babies are called.

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