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Tent City

We've staked this humble home of ours, out here among the stars
Where dreams do fade with waning light, and stings like salt upon old scars.

Pitched upon ashes of once lofty endeavors
Held to the ground with stakes that sever,
our vision of a future from dreams once held
and the belief that passing storms are always weathered.

These canvas walls, a cruel embrace, provide cold comfort in amorphous space.
Zippered in against the dark to discuss the dreams we have misplaced.

How did we get here?
My lament to rising moon.
On fortunes folly and life's discordant tune.
Once a man of measure, with shining dreams untethered,
Now a sunken soul, battered by fates typhoon.

Just collateral damage of a system gone awry
A simple twist of fortune goes you or I
I've staked my claim amid this sea of ravaged tents
In this dusty, windswept field
Where dreams have come to die.

ckahn

@ckahn

A girl.

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Tremendous! Heart wrenching and real. 👍

Strong write my sweet👏👏👏👏

@misslittleDHP thank you☺I actually just edited the second stanza, I think it's better. Thanks for the RP dear friend✨🌷✨

@Stablish thank you for the RP! Muchly appreciated!✨💋✨

Your most welcome ✨💓✨😘

@ckahn my pleasure lovely lady 💚✨💚

Brilliant write hun 👍👏👏❤

@leelee101 thank you kindly Sir Lee☺ and for the RP you get a smack!🌟💋🌟

Quality write 👏👏👏

@Burrfoot thank you dear☺you saw last stanza right? Sometimes it breaks and makes it seem finished. Usually one can tell but the 3rd stanza does have the air of finality which might not prompt to next page😝just making sure😜

@Burrfoot thanks for RP💗💋💋💋💗

Yip, I tap the screen and it shows me how many 'pages' there is 😉

@Burrfoot really? Cool feature. You have an iPhone?

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