7 October 2012
Hey guys! I'm in a way unfamiliar with Opuss and not so popular here, but I'm creating my first challenge. I created a poem that's quite long, and I don't know what title I should give it. So the challenge is for you guys to give it a title! I'm also quite a greenhorn, so please feel free to improvise in the poem and leave me feedback! Also tag it as #title
Here's the poem:
Here I am, looking up Towards the blue sky The clouds passing by
I've taken this chance To stop and to think Of the story of my life That's written by ink
I laughed to tears Recalling the years Before there was fear When all things were dear
Now I'm pitifully smiling Though I feel like crying I'll have to stop relying And start thinking of trying
I'll bite my lip and take a dip In this toxic road Without a boat
It's going to be thorny But just like they told me, "All roses have thorns, ever since they were born"
But look at me now I'm a laughable mess It seems that somehow I have failed the test
I'll try and try And climb so high But when I look down The fear will rise and I'll fall down
PS: Thanks for reading and I would be really greatful if you joined and leave me comments!
(?) • Opuss № I