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How lillied was my valley. (part three)

It was Friday in late summer, over two years since I first entered my green place and Dad was finally coming home the next day. I was glad it would be a Saturday; we always listened to the Football Results together and still do that tomorrow. Although we would never kick a ball around again.
I went to the dump sensing it would be for the last time. It turned out to be a strange, magical day. Standing on its highest point surveying my little domain, everything seemed beautiful, sad and different. A ring of cerulean cloud set with silver gulls had formed over the docks and the tug boats wailed mournful from down river. An old crippled rat tottered close to me and sat there unafraid. I gave it some of my half eaten Wagon Wheel and stroked its head, then I saw something I have never witnessed before or since; Hundreds of rats moving as one. Like a graceful grey magic carpet skimming over the green valleys. I fancied the display was just for me. There was an eerie stillness, the distant noisy docks fell silent and the seagulls ceased their shrill. The sky darkened over the river and thunder rumbled around the dump. Fork lightening lanced the black clouds and torrents of rain lashed the land. I stood high over my little kingdom soaking, smiling and weeping, aware something special was happening to me but not understanding.
I never went back. I expect they are all gone now, my dump, the corner pubs, cobblestones and corrugated iron.
I hope Toad and Ratty had a good life.
Often over the years I heard stories about a weird solitary child who roamed Beckton Dumps.
Sometimes he would be an orphan gypsy or even the ghost of a boy who died there. I used to wonder why I had never seen him until I realised it was probably me, still I was happy to be a part of the local folk lore.
In one corner of my small piece of land there is a heap of rubbish and soil. I leave the Bellbind to grow there and in summer it's covered in white flowers.
I call them 'Lily of the Valley'.

The End.

TOM MAY

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Beautiful 💗 I love this piece, as it reminds me a little bit of myself.

@IndiaSparrow does it, in what way? I am glad you like! 😽

@crowncottage there's a little woods nearby my house, not really worth being called a woods to be honest. I used to go all over there, it was my little green place. And I may have had a catapult, climbed up a tree and used it on some unsuspecting bullies from my school. Fun times 😜💗

It was amazing to me, I saw some beautiful things in there that I felt nature had specially arranged for me 😜🌟

@IndiaSparrow well yes, that really is similar, I am going to tell Tom about it, he will be pleased. Do you like animals the same as Tom and me? 🐸🐭🐣🐰🐺

@crowncottage yeah! I'm hopefully going to university to study zoology, so wildlife science all the way 💗🐸🐯🐨🐻🐭🐺🐗🐘

@IndiaSparrow wow, good luck with that, it should be a wonderful career!

@crowncottage thanks! I'm going to need all the luck I can get 🍀🍀

@IndiaSparrow I haven't got any shamrocks on my computer! 😄

Class as ever!

@Munford thank you very much! 😽

A gorgeous read as always😍😍😍😍

@misslittleDHP thank you sweetie! 😽

Really enjoyed this ❤😘

@sjw I am glad! :))

Wonderful! That was lovely 👍😊

@rracmada yes, thank you! ☺😽

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@lemonz thank you, Tom is a good writer. Did you read the other parts? ☺

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@lemonz why do you think you are not now?

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@lemonz I am ill in bed at the moment so I can't check but I am sure you are wrong. Your talent can't jus disappear perhaps you just feel a bit down?

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@lemonz that will be it then! Try to write some cheerful bits even if you don't feel it, it may help. Thank you, hopefully I will feel better tomorrow!

Loved reading this! Is such a feel good tale 😄👍😘

@minxyMolly Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the reposts too! 😽

@crowncottage my pleasure 💗😘

The way he writes is truly captivating. I had to read all three parts from start to finish, I couldn't stop myself. Adore this story, honestly one of my favourites.

@Jamtots thank you for telling me and for the reposts. He has just written a new on which I will be posting today or tomorrow, I hope you like that too! ☺

@crowncottage ooo, can you tag me so I don't miss it? Looking forward to reading it

@Jamtots yes I will if I manage to post it. I sent it in the usual way by email but there was an error message. I will try again, keep your fingers crossed. ☺

Lovely story! S

Lovely story! So amazing! is what I meant to say 😉

@Tizzy Yes, it's a true story too, Tom May wrote it. I post his work on Opuss because he can't use a computer. I think he is very talented! ☺

@crowncottage Ah ok! Makes it even more enjoyable knowing that it actually happened! That's good to hear, and I agree - this is a very talented story! Thanks for posting it :3

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