'Have you lost you mind!?', Ana said. She was utterly disappointed in me.
'I'm sorry Ana..I'll try and do better next time...' but it was too late. Ana had hit me, a punch more of. Right in the stomach, making me vomit up my lunch. I lay on the ground, crying.
'I hope you're happy now, Ana,' I said bitterly.
She replied in an all too smug voice, 'I sure am.' She smiled and walked away.
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