It's my first time
And I am afraid
My father told me
This job pays
So don’t mess it up
Don’t let me down
Now go down
Into the mines you go
The dim
Dark
Dusty mine
I go
Wielding my torch
My life supply
That could save me
As I go down into the mine
You never know what you might find
As weird sounds
Come from the ground
That no-one know why
I admit i’m afraid
Afraid to die
Under that horrible coal mine
I’m a miner
Only twelve years old
So save me
From this living hell
How did you like this story?
Your feedback helps daydreamingbaby understand what's working
@daydreamingbaby
I believe that good things fall apart so better things can fall together, its just about waiting around long enough for those better things. My old opuss was Hafy.
Similar Stories
Comments & Feedback (5)
@Jamtots hahaha thanx we had a trip yesterday to the mines so I gave it a go. It was horrible I would hate to work there. :)
@daydreamingbaby I've been to one before too, you're right it looked horrible. The thought of going down those elevators into the mine is freaky :c
@Jamtots yeah. And it being so dark. It really ruins your eyes and I wasn't even down there for long.
Want to join the conversation? Sign in to leave a comment.