30 June 2012
NEED CRITIQUE/ADVICE
I had a dream that I shot
Heroin; I was floating through
Time and the
World was all mine shit the
Rush was a crime, all I'd
Remembered just intenser, and
Between the rolling in my
Bed from the
Glory in my head I nodded that
She loved me, that we
Kissed and she hugged me
Asleep on my body till
Morning couldn't worry for
Surely she'd hold tightly but
I woke up alone,
And looked at my phone;
Not a word from her,
Several from a dealer.
Heroin • Opuss № I