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Flick

Why them?
Why their house?

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The phone vibrates
In his pocket

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...Thank God
he didn't notice

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The blade
glints from memory

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He looks up
Stares at them
Seeing them for the first time
Then looks at the blade

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There is movement

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He stands before them
Terrified they plead

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Flick, flick, flick.....
Nothing

"shit, bloody lidl batteries......

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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@Jamtots sorry best I could do. 🙆

Aaaaah, thank youuu 😍😘😘 This is great, very suspenseful, no need to apologise 😊

Great! Well done hun 👏 my minds blank on the subject 😳

@Jamtots @sjw aww cheers. I'll write about anything. 😂💚

😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Lol 😂👏

@misslittleDHP @pthasse ha. Flashlight isn't really a word to get the poetic juices flowing. But I had a go. 😂

Hahahahaha looove this!!! 😂😂😂😭😭😭

VERY clever Eddie! Had no idea where it was taking me 👏😌😘

@Fly10 ha. I thought it was a lame attempt but thanks. It's funny as the piece I was proud of hardly got noticed. Opuss is a funny old place. 😂👍💚

Haha made me chuckle :)

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