Just a heads up I will be judging the young writers house hold on the 10th. Same time, 10:00pm (GMT) please repost this so that everybody knows. Also I have only got two entries so far so please enter!!! :) thanks
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Look like a girl, act like a lady, think like a man, work like a boss. Or on the other hand I could stay at home in my pyjamas eating crisps and go on opuss. :D
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@eivilduccy what is young writer's household contes about? I'm kind of new to opuss and I've only entered one contest.
@AWriterGirl You're supposed to write ABOUT the word? Or can you just incorporate it into your poem, like in this instance, describing something.
@Klaire it has to include the word, but not really about it. Of you read mine, for example, I mention "crimson" once. Others will make it about the word entirely, but as far as I know, you have your pick of the two options.
I've read it but I'm not giving anything away until tomorrow! By the way can people please repost this, I only have two entries so far.
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