13 March 2013

This is for Beth.

1. Read how to write a poem part one.

When an apple's in a pie

2. Write another line about ANYTHING YOU LIKE using the technics in PART ONE.

when an apples in a pie

It makes me sad

3.now you have more ryme choices it could ryme with either part now. So you could have

When an apples in a pie

It makes me sad

Or even cry

Or...

When an apples in a pie

It makes me sad

In think its bad

Or...

When an apples in a pie

it makes me sad

In fact i think its...

HALF SENTANCES ARE OK.

4. once you've picked one of them you have to chose how to end it. EG1 could end with an Ad ryme or an Ie ryme or a Ry ryme, EG2 could end with an Ad ryme or an Ie ryme but EG3 could only end with an Ie ryme or an Ad ryme but not a Ts ryme because you dont ryme half lines. All you need to do is pick the one you like and ryme it.

5. In primary school you probably analysed ryme patterns by using numbers. We could lable these three examples

1,2,1

1,2,2

1,2,3

The most commenly used ryming patterns that can follow on form thesse are labled

1,2,1,2

1,2,2,1

1,2,3,2

1,2,3,1

So you just need to pick one of them and use it to finnish your verce. My favourte is 1,2,3,2 because it flows nicely so my finnished poem would sound like this.

When an apples in a pie

It makes me sad

Infact i think its

Rather bad

6. Most of the time a verce with one of those ryming patterns will stop at four lines but if it makes sence to carry on without starting a new verce then a fith and sixth line, as long as they follow the pattern, make sence as well. EG in my poem 1,2,3,2 the six line one would go 1,2,3,2,4,2 but with the words i have it would not make sence

7. I could say

An apple in a pie

Is verry sad

In fact i think its

Rather bad

And seeing it can

Drive me mad

Or... I could start a new verce

What makes me mad is

Apples in a pie

Because it makes

The apples die...

Wich makes alot more sence.

8. Now you've writen the first verce try writing the second with the help of PART THREE

ETCFGHow To Write Rymes PART TWO • Opuss № I