29 October 2012

"Im sorry," said the reseptionist "But Bary hasn't got any relatives." "No im a close friend!" Bethen tryed. "Then its still no." the Lady continued. "PLEASE." Bethen said. "No." said the reseptionist.

Bethen gave up trying to perswade her and loged on to her facebook app to see if Alana had any idias. Hi Lana What is it? I cant see him! Any more "clues"? Yes ACTUALY Oh yes, like what? Bary is his name Like thats going to help Oh well any tips? You could watch the case How? Go to the court house and tell them you want to see Bary. You should come to! See you there, two hours till it opens! How did you know that? Google. See you soon then miss google.

Later at the court house… "Lets ask him some questions!" Bethen said jumping out of her seet. "Bethen don't!" Alana called after her. Alana spoke wisely but Bethen had no interest in stoping, she ran stright into a bundle of press camerers and reporters and was sweped away. "I did warn you." Alana said as Bethen came back ti their seats. "Its way harder than i predicted!" Bethen said almost in tears. "There will be other times anyway he seemed prety inasent out there." "Mabie he is!" Bethen said. "Mabie it was a teacher!" So the pair of young detectives set of to the local school to ask the teachers about the fire.

FIRE INVESTIGATION

MR SMITH top floor staff room MS JONES see mr smith MRS WHITE teaching DR FRY fixing computers MISS LYVER on dutey SIR ROBERTS in the ground floor coridor MRS INTHEM welcoming gests

The girls knew there where clever, they knew there was other staff at the school but they were in asembely so it couldnt have been them. Some of the people in the survey were irelivent as well for egsample Dr Fry couldnt have started it because the computer room was on the other side of school. After looking at a crayon map of the school drawn by one of the students they realised there where three posible fire-starters MR SMITH MS JONES and MRS WHITE so all they had to do was descover wich one was guilty, to do so both girls created match.com acounts and looked up the teachers. The only one they could find was Mrs White (or as known to match.com Jenny)

I curently have no job due to a fire insadent, i enjoy peace and quiet. My fave month is December and i would like to meet somone sypathetic, kind and caring.

"Its never her!" Alana said. "I can't belive she said FAVE!" Bethen said. "Were do we look now?" "Lets try… the school website!" Said Bethen and both girls got back to thier typing. This time they only found Mrs Jones because Mr Smith was a suply teacher so they didn't have a record on him. MRS JONES:What she says I like to lead by egsample and will always beat any challenge at any cost and always aim to ceep my students safe. What her pupils say: 1.She smokes 2.Good teacher 3.Rubish LONG homework 4.DULL 5.i quite like her 6.Lovely 7.Good teacher,not very nice 8.the only smoker who teaches personal hygene 9.mean hypocrite 10.will rise to ANY challenge

"Couldn't be her then." Alana said. "It has to be one of them!" Bethen said leaning further into the screen trying to find any more infomation. "It could be Mr Smith" Alana sugested. "He had no records on any websight says the AMAZOSERCH." Bethen said "Helpfull." Alana said blancly. "Anyway i have all the clues we need im going home, do you want a crime solvers sleep over?" "Why not ill text my mum." Alana said but when she reached for her phone all she could see was one text… STOP INVESTIGATING THE WESTSHIRE SCHOOL FIRE NOW OR FACE THE CONCUQUENSES NOW ALANA BETHEN STOP IT!!!!!!!!!!!

I am very sorry i havent posted in a while its because i am on holliday with no wifi so this will be an extended chapter.

FINAL CHAPTER

Alana awoke surounded be piles of paper and ink wich she eventualy realised were meant to be in the bin. To sit up she had to push herself through a mass of detective storys and fire infomation leaflets before she could even see Bethen. "I think we should stop investagating now." She said. "Why?" said Bethen "Your not scared are you?" "A bit, i got this creepy text and anyway this is sirius business. Tobys friend DIED if we get this wrong he will be SO upset! And anyway we have probably upset him already." Alana said as she stood up in the sea of evidance. "Let me see that text." Bethen said leaning over Alanas phone. "I think i know what happened now." Bethen said. "We have one week left before we have to go home, gab your bag! We have to get there before school starts!" Bethen and Alana stumbled out of the door with scruffy hair and half in thier pagarmers. Once they reached the school grounds tey asked for Mrs Jones and got sent to 7w5. "Hello girls. What are you doing here? I don't remember you faces from school and why are you up so early." The teacher asked with a puzeled expretion towards the two scruffy teenagers in thier pagarmers standing tyerdly at the door of her class room. "Oh we just want to do a teachers from diferent schools survey so we desided to start here." Alana said, thinking on her feet. "Realy? What school do you go to?" She said growing more suspitios by the second. "Oh don't worry you won't have herd of it." Bethen said following Alana's egsample. "Yes its miles from here!" Alana said trying to back up Bethens story because she could see that Mrs Jones didn't believe it. "So what are the questions?" She said giving up her questioning on the girls. "Do you still smoke?" Alana said. "Well, i might as well tell you girls, you oviusly don't live round here. Yes, i do. But i was meant to give it up for a chalenge." Once she had said that both girls realised something important. They had no clue wether she was lying or not. Regardless the continued. "How do you get rid of you cigarets?" Bethen said. Mrs Jones turned bright red. "I put them in the bin. Not like its you busines anyway! You havn't wtiten any of this down so you don't want it for a teacher secrets page! Leave me alone its school time." She shooed them out of the class room and they walked back because they knew that on one else would be any help either. "We are missing sonething masive." Alana said. "What?" "I'll text you later ok."

Is this later No Now Yes What are we missing It cant have been a teacher Why The police SAW bary do it And They know what thier doing Oh realy cos that realy helps Toby Its not about toby its about you! We have no clue Oh, shure. Ill solve it by tonight Good luke Dont need it Stop being so stuburn! So im the stubon one! Im only trying to help! So thats why you think i cant do it. Im turning my phone of GOOD RIDANCE! Lana i didnt mean it come back. Please.

Three hours later Alana got a phone call telling her to meet at the basket ball pitch down the road from the hotel they where staying at. "So what do you want?" Alana asked. "Solved it." Bethen said "Realy?" "Oh yes, i submited it to the police wesite for vewing!" "You do know that the public can see it now right?" Alana said. "Yes look at it!" Bethen reached for her Netbook and clicked on the hyperlink for the police website, heres what it said. PUBLIC OPINION BETTYBOOBOO: i think Bary is inasent he only used a spraypaint can right? If the police ferensics team where as cluless as the newstpaper made out then prehaps it was actualy normal. The only way that would work was if sonone egnited it abd the must have done that.... Well realy i don't know how. Most likely simeone droped a match from a window. But if the police read this please shorten Barys prison sentsnce. MRBADCOP: Not enugh evidance im afraid, sory no point invesyagating

Them Alana had an idia. What if someone fid drop sonething into the can, but by acsedent rather than on purpose. What if Mrs Jones droped her cigaret from the staff room window when Mr Smith so he wouldn't descover that she had failed her chalenge. What if that cigaret had fallen in the way of the spray can and set the paint on fire? Alana quicly typed it up and both girls wgent home. The bus was taking them to thier next big game in Northenbrough and they started texting.

The police shortened his sentance Realy I read it in the paper POLICE OUTWITTED BY TEENAGE GIRLS I found out who sent the text Who was it Bethen Toby But why He was cross cos his friend died and we didn't feel sory Are you dumped them Oh yes Alana but who needs boys Good point. Im so glad sam said i could tore the county with your team Anything better than the old Lillzo then You got it BettyBooBoo BettyBooBoo? Your user name Oh yes, long story see you at the game. Bye

And they did see eachother. They played on the same team. And guess what they won! And Toby even said "Hi girls"! So that was the start if an exiting new month.

THE END

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