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I wrote the beginning of a Doc. Who script, is this A) long enough and B) good (Piercing scream breaks the silent night) (Image flashes into one of a house) (Mother and Father of a child are being restrained by shadows) Mother: Katy! Katy…
Male Voice over: when Jesus left the planet, he promised that he would come back in an hour of need.(during this, actors act out what is happening. Continue for 2 secs after end) VoiceOver: From then the world began to advance. (Start fast…
Comment on this so that I can either: a) improve it, or B) scrap it/ continue it. Oh, and please tell the truth. Thank you. Apes ruled the planet. Humans did not exist yet. Yet. And as the first ape showed signs of becoming human, a new a…
Prologue: A man runs through the street, obviously panicking. Many people close their curtains on him. Masked men chase after him. His is backed into a corner. A Masked man walks up to man. He brings out a long syringe. Patient looks at i…
Chapter 1: Mr Robson spoke in his dreary voice that normally sent me to sleep within seconds, but not this time. This time, the air seemed to run with electricity and for some reason everyone, apart from Mr Robson, knew that something was …