11 June 2012
I have been on opuss for over a month now and have received nothing but praise (for which I am so thankful). But I would really love it if I could get some constructive (preferably negative) feedback so that I can hopefully try and improve!
Here are some examples to help:
"your stories never contain more than two characters at any one time"
"the series 'scenes' isn't very good, why have you continued it?"
"your characters are very 1 dimensional, consider giving them more depth and back story"
"I find the way you describe things boring. It doesn't flow well."
"do more poetry."
"you're shit. Stop writing."
Etc.
Honestly I welcome any feedback and would really love it to keep on improving!
Criticise Me! • Opuss № I