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Forever Searching

So she walked that weary road again, kept looking both left and right.
She knew it was here, it had to be, it was where they lay that night.

He held her hand, spoke so gently,tenderly and kind.
She had to come back to look again for that thing she had left behind.

She stepped onto the road again her feet were cold and bare, she knew she shouldn't be doing this, but she really didn't care.

Through the mist the lights shone low, that's when she saw it shine and as she bent to pick it up she heard the almighty whine.

When she turned she saw the car, crushed over on its side. She fell to her knees and wept again. . Knowing he had lied.

He told her she would be okay, she was his beautiful wife. As he lay beside her that dark night, as she slowly lost her life.

It's was only when the wreck was cleared. They found her wedding band. He keeps it safe on a chain, never placed it back on her hand.

To him, it keeps her ever near and he likes to hold it tight. Not knowing she goes back to search, for it night, after night, after night.

hilster

@hilster

Wide interests. Just out there seeking information about everything I can take in.

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Brilliant! Gave me goosebumps 👍🌟

Hauntingly beautiful...❤💔❤💔

Thank you so glad you both liked it it was a dream I had last nii

Night I woke up and wrote it at about 4 am.

Wow this is heartbreakingly beautiful! 💚💔💚 (don't forget to mention people in a comment eg. @misslittleDHP and @jojo72 for them to see your reply) 💚💚

@naaviie ah right I now know what to do thanks for the advice 😏

@jojo72 thank you so much 😊

@misslittleDHP thanks it was a dream I had. Woke up and wrote it. ❤

Hehe no problem 😜

That is lovely and rather sad. I wish I had dreams like that! 😄

@hilster what inspiration our dreams can bring💤💤💤

@hilster fantastic 💗

@crowncottage aww bless you thanks❤❤

@minxyMolly thanks sweetly x❤x

Stunning piece. A haunting & vivid portrayal of both your dream, but what could also be almost real. You could continue this one y'know!! 😌😉

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@RichWithey thanks appreciate your comment ❤💗❤

@Fly10 thanks never thought of a continuation?? Perhaps something to think of. 💜

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