The Edge. It marked the edge of the city, the edge of the permitted area, the end of supposed safety. The government said it was dangerous, but then, they had tried to convince him that his daughter was too. He decided and took the last step, through the energy wall that surrounded the border.
"Here I go."
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Ah, you know how to make a guy curious (: Sounds great, is it Sci-Fi? Tag me in the next part pleaseeee 😄
This is brilliant!!! Really want to know what happens, could you tag me in the next part please? :) :) Love it!!!
Don't worry! I'll tag you both! I plan to write a bit per day but I might not post everyday if it isn't long enough!
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