Love's blind eyes are blinder still when faced with Doubt's despicable will. The wretched minds of Mistrust and of Hate are trying to upset the blind girls fate.
She refuses to see and refuses to hear, as she struggles against the machinations of Fear.
Hope and dear Love walk hand in hand, as they fight against Time's unkindly sand,
As it slips away into the abyss, attempting to steal Love and Faith's chance,
To dance the dance they are meant to dance.
Sadly all that is proved by Death, is that Love's not just blind but She's also deaf,
For she will not hear Comfort nor Reason the same,
As She's pushed by Loss and is counselled by Blame.
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