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jan3601
2012-12-27T10:32:56

I'm Back For Now

I feel I've left you, Drifted away, Distracted from Opuss, Ditched, if you may. The distractions of life, Ceased my time, Whereas Opuss had to, Wait in line.

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jan3601
2012-10-30T21:49:43

What Is A Grandchild?

Disclaimer: This is not mine. What is a grandchild. Well you may ask. It's a song in the heart, It's a funny clown mask.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T21:14:56

Untitled

If you can safely lie about something, It probably isn't worth lying. Disclaimer: NOT ALWAYS.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T20:53:22

You Decide The End

There's a battle on, Between heart and mind, Within the soul, Resides this bind. The heart is risky, Aggressive as well, Will it win. It's hard to tell.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T20:45:51

Untitled

Add title. But what too choose, Maybe a summary, Or written to amuse. Start composing, But what to write, It could be a sonnet, Or a scene 'bout a fight.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T20:42:29

Untitled

What am I doing, Why am I here. All questions asked, After more than one beer!.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T20:38:09

Short Lived

I'll fade away, To nothing more, There's nothing else, You need me for. I'll disappear, Off the earth, I could be in Sydney, Or in Perth.

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jan3601
2012-10-21T20:31:11

Untitled

My mind is screaming for you, My body's aching for you, My thought are filled of you, But you don't have a clue.

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jan3601
2012-10-17T21:20:27

Untitled

Please..

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jan3601
2012-10-17T21:19:50

Block It Out

Blotch it out, Erase from within, Old memories, For the bin. History of me, Chuck it away, I don't want to know, So it's not here to stay.

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jan3601
2012-10-17T21:11:32

"Move Move Move!"

"Move move move!", Where the words he said, As he sent us all, To be dead. Peering over, The ledge ahead, I was foreseeing, Me lying down dead.

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jan3601
2012-10-15T21:27:25

Opuss Meals

Right, write any Opuss meals in the comments, try to think of at least one!!. Mine is... Roast Post :).

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jan3601
2012-10-15T21:18:18

Untitled

I'm dull and bored, I've slept, I've snored, I played my games, I've complained about names. I'm bored and dying, Slowly defying, The will to sleep, Into bed I'll creep.

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jan3601
2012-10-15T21:06:02

Untitled

Keep it together, Keep holding on, Don't give up, You know he's wrong. It's not perfect, That's crystal clear, But you can go far, Trust me my dear..

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jan3601
2012-10-14T21:44:10

Don't Do It

Don't snip the rope, Don't snuff it now, Just because, Your in a row. Look at all, The happiness, What's out there. It's anybodies guess.

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jan3601
2012-10-14T09:53:50

Is It Just Me???

Shut one eye, look at something really up close (so that your about 5cm away) and shake your head. AAAAAARHGHGH.

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jan3601
2012-10-11T21:30:14

Welcome To Opuss

Welcome to Opuss, A world of all words, Where stories and shout, Poems sing like birds. The inhabitants, Are odd little things, They care for words, Not jewellery or rings.

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jan3601
2012-10-11T21:24:14

Words

Words are a portal, To heaven or hell, Words transfer taste, Or feel or smell. Words are so thin, Yet they can hold the world, Give them a chance, And stories unfold.

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jan3601
2012-10-11T21:19:56

Smile

Just try to smile, All around, Smile for a while, And happiness is found. Smile even longer, And friends appear, Smile a bit wider, And the friends are brought near.

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jan3601
2012-10-11T21:13:49

50 Followers

Thanks guys. I really mean it. I've only been around a month, but you guys have all supported me!!. Shortly and sweetly, THANKS. :).

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jan3601
2012-10-10T21:05:54

#youngwritersemotion Results!

@LittleMissSam @Davedave16 @KANS So the results to #youngwritersemotion are here!!.

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jan3601
2012-10-09T21:37:44

Untitled

A feeling is like a burst of emotion, Spurred on by the slightest notion. One of love is a feeling of fire, In your heart the strongest desire.

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jan3601
2012-10-09T21:26:47

Feelings?

Feelings. How do you write them down?.

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2012-10-09T21:24:41

Phoenix

A Phoenix dies in flames, And is born in the ashes, An endless cycle, Memories just flashes. Red solid scales, Eyes of deep blue, Looks of a killer, It could hunt you.

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jan3601
2012-10-09T21:12:45

Airplanes B.o.B Ft. Hayley Williams

Can we pretend that airplanes In the night sky are like shooting stars I could really use a wish right now, wish right now, wish right now Yo, I could use a dream or a genie or a wish To go back to...

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jan3601
2012-10-09T21:07:05

Jan

There once was a boy called Jan, His nickname was Jan-the-man, He was Irish and crazy, Stupid and lazy, And did not look sexy or tanned..

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jan3601
2012-10-09T20:43:27

Being Emo

Right so this I'm hoping will be the first of many. After you've read it, comment on what topic I could write about next and I'll try to do one each day. So. Being emo. Just don't.

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jan3601
2012-10-09T20:17:26

Life

Tears are shed, Hope is dead, My life is lost, A deadly cost. I got fed up, With life's make-up, So I took the plunge, A life ending lunge.

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jan3601
2012-10-09T20:12:30

Quote #3

School kills creativity, and creativity kills school..

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jan3601
2012-10-09T19:21:01

Quote #2

Get on with it you ******* little wimp, you've got a life to make..

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jan3601
2012-10-09T19:19:48

Quote #1

Live life like a well raised child an make do with what you have, not a spoilt one and drop everything when you want something else..

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jan3601
2012-10-07T21:20:10

Don't Judge A Book By Its Cover

Don't judge a book by its cover, Whether its an enemy or a lover. Try to look beyond their eyes, And rip right through a nice disguise. Be wary of the people who, Are only fake, are not true.

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jan3601
2012-10-07T21:16:03

The Bird

The bird flies high, Above our heads, And is still flying, When we're in beds. It's eagle eyes, Scan the floor, For mice, frogs, Worms or more.

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jan3601
2012-10-07T20:34:43

#youngwritersemotion

Right guys. Zero entries. None. So the date is extended to Wednesday at 9pm British time and the word is: Arrogance Please try to write something and repost this. Thanks!.

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jan3601
2012-10-07T20:30:59

The Shadow

I don't write stories, don't be too harsh. Pant. Pant. Pant. He was catching up. Shadows were shrouding my view, and I could only see a few metres ahead. But I could t stop.

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jan3601
2012-10-07T10:19:13

Karate #1

Adrenaline pumping, Heart thumping, A punch comes in, It's swatted away. Kicks are flying, Pouts are tie'ing, He is getting tired, Starting to sway.

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jan3601
2012-10-06T23:21:35

Me, And Only Me

Well, hi guys. I'm Jan (pronounced Yan), and I'm a guy. I've been on Opuss for a few months now, and I've also invited a few people onto it (@Davedave16 being an example).

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jan3601
2012-10-06T23:11:15

youngwritersemotion

Well, it seems I have won #youngwritersemotion (given to me by @Davedave16) so I have to give you lot another word :O before I forget, REPOST THIS PLEASE.

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jan3601
2012-10-04T17:12:31

Untitled

I feel I should write a tribute, To all those who have passed, For all those who have lost their lives, Their memories must last.

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jan3601
2012-10-02T21:48:42

Insanity

Insanity is humanity, We are completely mad. We fight through the night, Until we don't feel bad. We make and we break, Some incredible inventions. And map lovely apps, that deserve way more mentions.

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jan3601
2012-10-02T21:19:34

Untitled

Life is a tumble of creation and magic, Some things are joyful but some things are tragic..

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jan3601
2012-09-30T21:20:41

Blue

Blue is the colour of a clear day sky, Blue is the colour of blueberries in pie. Blue is the colour of see water cool, And also the colour of a swimming pool.

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jan3601
2012-09-30T21:15:31

Wildfire Words

Rumours spreading, Like wildfire, To spread the word, Is the people's desire. Words are flying, Across the town, Soon it will, Reach the crown.

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jan3601
2012-09-29T23:00:29

Whisper

A whisper from the heart, is all it takes to start, A new life..

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jan3601
2012-09-29T19:43:36

Grumpy

Bah humbug. #emotion.

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jan3601
2012-09-29T07:56:18

Love

Love is the thing that gives us new life. Love is the thing that relieves us of strife. Love is made up of affection an care. Love is not judged by ones looks or ones hair.

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jan3601
2012-09-27T21:19:36

Young Story Time

Hello everybody. I am here to announce the suggestion of another young people's contest. The idea is that the first time, you write the first part of a story based on the word chosen.

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jan3601
2012-09-27T21:13:04

Glass

Glass is much like paper, Fragile but so plain, In fact it's much like my heart, Except easier to tame.

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jan3601
2012-09-27T20:32:32

#youngwritersemotion

Well, a bit of a let down, but that comes with setting a short deadline. From what my Opuss tells me I only have two entries, so it might be glitchy, but it might not.

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jan3601
2012-09-26T19:36:50

#youngwritersemotion

Many thanks to @Davedave16 for choosing my entry against all you guys, the vicious competition. As I do normally, I'll keep it brief.

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jan3601
2012-09-26T17:48:21

Rain

Rain, rain, Go away, Come again, Another day. How about, If I smile, You'll leave me be, A little while. Please, please, Listen here, I want my sun, It's O-So dear.

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2012-09-26T17:07:44

Belief

Belief in God may be important. Belief in those around you is important. But belief in yourself is a necessity..

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2012-09-23T21:55:53

The Torture House

This place drips, With liquid grey, They torture kids here, To this day. The groans and the silence, Is all you need to hear, Because if your a small, childlike kid, You'll tremble in sheer fear.

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jan3601
2012-09-23T21:36:47

Read Me, It Doesn't Take Long

Really sorry guys, not in the mood for writing BUT should I have a picture of me as my profile picture of the panda??. What do you think???.

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2012-09-23T21:26:16

Untitled

I'll take you on an adventure, Of mystery, treasure, intrigue, I'll see if you fall victim, To man's endless greed. There'll be a prize, Without a doubt, But if you die, Don't bother to shout.

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jan3601
2012-09-22T21:38:51

Death

Death is feared, All around, Thoughts of mourning, Buried in ground. But what is fearful, Of the end of life, Live it happy, Not ended by a knife.

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jan3601
2012-09-20T18:36:57

Freedom Of Speech

I'm a believer in freedom of speech, But often it ends up far out of reach, If you have an opinion, shout it to all, Your opinion matters, even if you small..

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2012-09-20T17:18:59

This Needs A Title

A black haze clouded my vision, as I rose from my resting place. The events from before were a blur, from the windows smashing, to the dart penetrating my skin. I don't know where I am or why I'm...

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2012-09-15T17:28:59

YWHH!

Alright, a few minutes late, but here are the results :O 1st place goes to.....@PIRGIR with Backstab, really truthful piece. 2nd place goes to.....@KANS with a brilliant poem.

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jan3601
2012-09-15T15:54:52

Read

PIRGIR Dave Kans Diddle Little one These are then entries I think I have for youngwritershousehold, comment if your not there but you've submitted.

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2012-09-14T07:47:59

YWHH!

So I'll start by thanking @ren360 for choosing me, means a lot :) but I guess I now have to pick a word which is..... Knife Sorry if it has been done, but I think it'll be good.

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2012-09-13T08:07:14

Untitled

Screams echo throughout the valley, and the smell of blood rests at the edge of my senses. It has begun..

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2012-09-11T21:26:17

Untitled

What awaits me, I don't know, I've travelled afar, Yet so long to go. 14 years This has been, I've tried to be kind, Not too mean.

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2012-09-11T21:23:47

Untitled

Tick-tock, Goes the clock, Time is running, Ever so cunning. Slips away from The tightest grip, Relax for a second, Through you life it will slip..

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2012-09-11T18:12:06

Lust

Right, so the word is lust, It gave my brain quiet a thrust, I don't know what to write, Time is tight, If this doesn't work I'm bust.

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jan3601
2012-09-11T17:59:20

READ ME PLEASE :)

For those who don't know (kind of a disclaimer), EVERYTHING I write is written in under five minutes, so if you don't like quickly done work, sorry!.

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2012-09-11T17:54:09

Untitled

I was a snug, bug in a rug, Until that human gave me a tug, I tumbled down wearing a frown, My god, what a dumb human thug. #youngwritershousehold.

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2012-09-11T13:57:41

Untitled

The cold wind, Whispers a song, As the snow falls, Summer long gone. The day is colder, Than the ice queens soul, To freeze me to death, Seems to be her goal.

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2012-09-11T13:51:53

Cheesy Riddle #1

WARNING. Answer is three pages forwards, please don't comment it :) What's unbreakable, Higher than the sky, Everybody has one, And we all want them to fly. Dreams :D.

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2012-09-11T13:30:56

If Only

If only I was clever, But I won't be, never ever. I wish I could be smart, Not like The Simpsons' Bart. Imagine me but witty, The thought makes me skitty.

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jan3601
2012-09-11T09:56:05

#questiontime

Okay, so here is the question (sorry, it's maths): Divide 30 by half, and add 10. What is the answer?.

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jan3601
2012-09-10T20:04:40

Love

For you, My sweetheart, Anything, Golden crown or diamond ring. I love you so, You mean so much, You have the sweetest, Gentlest touch.

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2012-09-10T19:59:55

Writers Block

DARN IT. I've got writers block, My brain right now, Is out of stock. My awful rhymes, Fail to come, Honestly, It's a pain in the bum. Inspiration, Need it now, To those who give it, Take a bow!.

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2012-09-09T21:34:11

Why?

Why live, Give me a reason. Why breath, What's it for. Why move, What's the point. Why, Why am I here?.

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2012-09-09T20:33:26

Untitled

Confusion, Delusion, Me and mind, No fusion. My life, Spiralling, Out of control, Tiring. What's happening, I'm so confused, My face looks, So bemused.

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2012-09-08T22:57:31

Untitled

Life is like play-dough, If you want it good you have to work though..

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2012-09-08T22:54:11

Untitled

Hello, Not bye, Come on, Don't be shy. I promise, I don't bite, And I never, Ever fight. I'll welcome you, Be a friend, Share with you, Till the end.

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2012-09-08T09:22:52

Crimson Blood

Crimson blood, On the floor, I want her back, Nothing more. The assassin, He came in the night, Swift as a swallow, No time for a fight.

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jan3601
2012-09-08T08:26:07

@Twilightianalex

Hi @Twilightianalex, It's you birthday today, So Opussians shout, Hip-hip, HOORAY. Your writing is great, And you always help, Give inspiration, When we yelp.

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2012-09-08T08:18:54

War

Every morning, The rising sun, Reminding you, They haven't won. The silhouette, Of incoming help, Drowns out the bullets, And cries of "yelp".

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2012-09-07T20:44:45

Gone

Time is running out, Now I'm starting to doubt, If you'll ever come. My heart starts to shout, My face shows a pout, I wonder if you'll come.

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2012-09-07T20:41:21

Rain

Rain splatters, Potter patter, Any harder, The window will shatter. Pouring down, Creating puddles, Sunbathers, In many muddles. Falling from, The now black sky, Blocking out, The shining pie.

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jan3601
2012-09-06T21:32:37

This School Year

Started school again today, The beginnings of GCSEs, But at the end of them, I doubt that I'll be pleased.

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2012-09-06T20:11:55

Untitled

It's musty here, It's rusty here, It's old, dead and dusty here. I've been trapped here year after year, Held hostage through injection of fear.

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2012-09-06T20:01:53

Please Read

I regret to inform those who enjoy reading my material that there will be a sever decrease in material being posted, as I now only have 1 hour leisure time on weekdays. Sorry. ;( jan.

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2012-09-05T21:18:05

Why Am I On Opuss?

I know that I'm not great at writing, But the stories have me biting, And reading @leelee101 is quite exciting, To close the app has me fighting.

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2012-09-05T20:55:23

Untitled

Bullets pierced my skin, Consciousness wearing thin, Emotions not needing to hide, With comrades falling at my side..

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2012-09-05T20:51:05

Untitled

What are we really, Fiends or friends, To achieve our wishes we know no ends. The evil is present of most of us, Like a seeping, rotting pus.

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2012-09-05T20:42:06

Time

Dawn, the first sliver of sun, Dusk, the time when werewolves run, Midday is when we get to work, Midnight is where the nightmares lurk..

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2012-09-05T20:35:17

Shoutout

Hey guys, this is just a quick post recommending my first personal friend to join Opuss @Davedave16 . He is writing a new story ATM and I like it a lot, please show him some support. Thanks, Jan.

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2012-09-05T18:15:17

Untitled

I found it, Deep inside the cave, To get there, I had to be brave. Wounds fed on my friends, Lives found their ends. Foes tried, To tear us apart, Many were dumb, Few were smart.

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2012-09-05T17:45:32

The Human Race

It's quiet here, There's nobody near, Peace is throughout this place. Before hand, A battle ground, Now a remain of the human race.

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2012-09-05T17:36:11

Untitled

Look forward not the past, Don't be sad have a blast, Have fun and enjoy, Cause life is only a decoy..

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2012-09-04T21:34:54

Untitled

It's not everyday you get to change your life, But for me it ended in strife. I forgot what really mattered, In front of me my life shattered. My newfound money, Appeared so great and sweet as honey.

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2012-09-04T18:33:12

Doorway To Start Anew

A doorway to new, A chance to restart, Maybe a chance, To fix my heart. A chance that's so easy to take, A new life to remake, To start again, A life times ten.

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2012-09-04T15:43:49

Untitled

Do you even know me, You seem to think you do, You always say you love me, But is that even true. Have you even thought, How I really feel, About you, about life, About how you steal.

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2012-09-03T23:37:33

Untitled

As morning breaks I start to wonder, What does lie on down yonder, Through the field of wheat now fresh, Through the fence of grey, dull mesh..

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2012-09-03T23:16:28

Untitled

Hi, from a bunch of friends at a sleepover (apparently for the mentally insane). I can't write properly with them around, but I felt like I had to write. Night y'all.

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2012-09-03T13:00:37

The Pros

SPEACIAL MENTION @lauraessex I forgot her in the first version!Here is my list of authors that I read regularly (in no particular order):. @awesomeannie. @leelee101. @naaviie. @twilightianalex.

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2012-09-03T12:15:58

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You closed the door on me, I thought I was there to stay, You forced me away, And now you'll pay....

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