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Never Giving Up

O my dream
I seriously doubt i must say
To have my oppus
On the TOP TODAY

Ive now posted 21
But im still not on top
I have not won
So i continue to sobb

Im almost there!
But almost isn't enough
Im going to continue i swear
I will NEVER give up

julian31011

@julian31011

Im julian:) im 14. I have a girlfriend named reanna. Weve been together for a year nd 4 months. We are very happy:) ive always written poems whether its for reanna or my mom. It is just something i enjoy too do:) im a nice and caring person who is happy with my life and i wanna share every thought and feelings in my writing.. Comment and heart my post please:)

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Cool write dude, I,be never looked at daily, or weekly stuff, hopefully never will but I do love the feedback and this community , I hope im always a resident โœจ

Sorry that ended up more about me ... Doh!!!! Great poem man, will check out your other stuff to ! ๐Ÿ˜„

I was top for a couple of hours, but then some others snuck in! Lol!! :)

Thanks bro;)

Ahhaha thats funny

Follow me!!!

Well slowly you will creep up! I noticed this morning I went from rank 53 to I think 37! Well written!๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ’™

Thats awesome! Im still far behind